Sgwrs:Gwe Gwenhwyfar

Could an admin please fix pl:Pajęczyna Szarloty? This page is protected and only stewards or local admins can edit it. I want to update the interwikis. Can someone please fix it? 98.90.4.59 22:22, 2 Tachwedd 2012 (UTC)[ateb]

Cwblhawyd
Llywelyn2000 (sgwrs) 03:55, 3 Tachwedd 2012 (UTC)[ateb]

I think the page is a bit redundant in the intro, because it says:

Nofel i blant gan E. B. White ydy Charlotte's Web ("Gwe Charlotte") (1952). Cafodd y nofel ei chyhoeddi'n gyntaf yn 1952, gyda darluniau gan Garth Williams. Why is the year stated twice? I would change it to: Nofel i blant gan E. B. White ydy Charlotte's Web ("Gwe Charlotte"). Cafodd y nofel ei chyhoeddi'n gyntaf yn 1952, gyda darluniau gan Garth Williams. Then it says: Ceir gêm fideo'n seiliedig ar yr addasiad. Why only the video game? What about the films? Also, I think you should use eginyn nofel pobl ifanc for the stub template. And updating the other languages again wouldn't hurt either. 12.77.229.41 17:56, 4 Tachwedd 2012 (UTC)[ateb]

Cwblhawyd
Thanks.. Llywelyn2000 (sgwrs) 07:18, 5 Tachwedd 2012 (UTC)[ateb]