Sgwrs:Asthma
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Mae'r erthygl hon yn rhan o'r WiciBrosiect Meddygaeth. |
Hi, Dyfrig! Thanks a lot for correcting -- I hope it is not too much trouble, but at least I learn a lot by it.
However, I am wondering if cause and result turned round in the last sentence: You corrected it into "Mae'n bosib fod asthma yn rhedeg yn y teulu ac yn achosi datblygiad alergeddau", and what I meant was "asthma often runs in the family and often is caused by allergies"... --219.207.92.10 14:47, 1 Gor 2004 (UTC)
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Gwirwyd y ddolen sawl tro ac fe'i cafwyd yn wallus. Trwsiwch neu ddilewch hi os gwelwch yn dda.